A workshop leader told me my characters all sounded the same
I was at a small writing workshop in Austin about six months ago, and I read a scene with three people talking. The leader, a woman named Sarah, stopped me and said, 'Jason, I can't tell who is speaking without the dialogue tags. They all have the same voice.' That hit me hard. I went home and looked at my old stories, and she was right. My gruff detective and his teenage daughter used the same sentence patterns and vocabulary. I started keeping a notebook for each main character, jotting down phrases they'd use, words they'd avoid, and how their background would shape their speech. Now, before I write a conversation, I review those notes. It adds a step, but the dialogue feels real for the first time. Has anyone else gotten specific feedback on character voice that made you change your process?